Thursday, October 14, 2010
10.8.10 Reading response.
The plot in my story is that Yolanda comes back from this one place, & wants to travel alone already, but her Tias think she's joking because she barley knows her hometown or something. The conflict in my story is that Yolanda is looking for some Guavas, but she can't find any. She finally stopped at this little market, there was a lady, she asked Yolanda if she wanted anything to drink, Yolanda asked if she had any Guavas. A little boy came up from behind the counter & told Yolanda where she can find them sense the lady said they didn't have any at the moment & haven't seen any anyways. The solution is that the little boy is going to show Yolanda where they are. Yolanda wanted to go to so they went in her car, past some mean & nasty trees! Finally they got there. The setting is kinda bright dirt & Guava trees waiting to be picked. I think the universal theme is Human Nature, because Yolanda is on an adventure & we all go on adventures sense it happens to all of us.
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Daph, are you reading a children's book? Because that is how your response reads. The conflict is finding Guavas or is this a little problem on the way to the big issue? Where is this taking place? "kinda bright dirt and trees"? Is this a quote in the book? Did you take notes in class? Where are they? Did you look at the checklist? Where is the question?
ReplyDelete1 NS You showed a very limited understanding of the assignment or no awareness of your choices in your work. The assignment showed little imagination, has little to no literary features and/or support
Daphny
ReplyDeleteIt seams like you dnt really like he book your reading and like it's not interesting. My question is: Do you think you could be more descriptive and how?