Using Your Notes Summarize What Is Happening In Your Story Using Two Examples From Your Book, Include At Least ONE Connection & One Inference That You Have Made While Reading..
Avalon High. By Meg Cabot
Using My notes I Can See That Ellie[Main Character] Is Falling For A Guy Named Will[2nd Character], But Will Is Taken By Jennifer[3rd Character]. Will Invited Ellie To A Party, Ellie Was Looking For Lance[4th Character] Because They're Partners In World Lit. & Their Teacher Found Out That They Weren't Working Together, Anyways, Ellie Went Upstairs & Found Lance & Jennifer Together Kissing! : O Ellie Wanted To Tell Will What Was Going On, But Will's Step Brother Marco, Didn't Let Her, & Then Marcos Was Telling Her Something About The Old Days, You Know About Camelot, How Lancelot[Lance], Guinevere[Jennifer] & Elaine[Ellie], & Ellie Was Suppose To Fall For Lancelot Instead Of King Arther Which Was Will. Ellie Was Puzzled By How Marco Knew All Of That. I Have A Connection With This Because When I Do Something Bad & Someone Watched Me Do It, They Want To Got Tell, But I Try To Stop Them. It's Like Im Marco & The Someone Is Ellie. I Think That Ellie Is Going To Concede[To Accept] That She's Just Making All Of This Up In Her Head, & Everything That's Relating To Camelot Is Just A Cowincidence.[However You Spell It].
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ReplyDeleteDaphz,
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job with the summary, but you don't need to CAP every single word. Also, how would would showing evidence from your book have made your response better?? You missed getting a P because you didn't support your thinking.
Grade: 6PP You showed a sufficient amount of understanding of the assignment and expectations and were aware of the choices that you made in your work. The assignment reflected imagination and worldly awareness as well as some literary terms and features with intention and understanding.